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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The charts illustrate the percentage of people's cooking and eating out and the trend of consuming Fast-Food and Sit-down Restaurant Meals each d
ecades
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decade
between 1970 to 2000. Overall, the part of eating out gradually had became larger every 10 years. At the same time, the number of both of l
ines:
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the lines
 Fast-Food and Sit-down Restaurant Meals had u
nchangeably
not changeable or subject to change
unchangeable
increased,
however
, the junk food's number had steeply s
hoot
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shot
up. So, from the both of charts, its part h
ad became
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became
popular in our lives. The percentage of the external meals had recorded 10, 15, 35 and 50% in 1970, 1980, 1990 and 2000 respectively. From
this
 changing, the popularity of it had gradually r
ose.
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risen
 Indeed, the other figure had been the part of Home Cooking. The number of people who had consumed in Sit-down restaurant had gently gone up,
however
, the population of consumers in RTE (Ready To Eat) shop had steeply s
hoot
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shot
up and its line had been higher than other line since 1983.

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