You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket authority about that. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who are you give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Sir,
My name is John, and I am a regular customer of your store. Just recently I have met an accident in your store at the canned food section.
It happened when
,
I was looking for a canned jar of pineapples in the section. I wanted to check the different sizes and expiry Remove the comma
apply
date
on the pineapple Fix the agreement mistake
dates
cannes
placed on the racks. WhileChange the capitalization
Cannes
,
reaching out for one of the cans placed on the Remove the comma
apply
third
row, I felt a sharp object on the hand. Upon analyzing it was found that one of the cans lid
was not properly sealed and the sharp edge was popping out. Change to a genitive case
the lid of the can
the lid of the cans
This
might have occured
during transportation or placement and resulted in a minor cut on my thumb.
ICorrect your spelling
occurred
,
am writing Remove the comma
apply
this
so as to get your attention on prevention of such
accidents in the future. As a precaution, Correct your spelling
maybe
may be
you can devise a checklist for the safety Correct your spelling
maybe
os
all canned items and or similar products.
I hope these measures will prove effective and hope to hear from you soon
Yours Sincerely
JohnCorrect your spelling
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