You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket authority about that. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who are you give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

Dear Sir, My name is John, and I am a regular customer of your store. Just recently I have met an accident in your store at the canned food section. It happened when

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I was looking for a canned jar of pineapples in the section. I wanted to check the different sizes and expiry

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on the pineapple

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placed on the racks. While

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reaching out for one of the cans placed on the

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row, I felt a sharp object on the hand. Upon analyzing it was found that one of

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was not properly sealed and the sharp edge was popping out.

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during transportation or placement and resulted in a minor cut on my thumb. I

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am writing

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so as to get your attention on prevention of

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accidents in the future. As a precaution,

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you can devise a checklist for the safety

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all canned items and or similar products. I hope these measures will prove effective and hope to hear from you soon Yours Sincerely John