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To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumptions?

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Introduction
Few theories state that the issue of increasing natural disasters around the globe can be taken care by hiking the
fuel
Use synonyms
 prices. The following essay
disagees
be of different opinions
disagrees
dosages
 to the statement as
Body paragraph 1
the
Suggestion
The
 issue can be solved only by having a control over global warming, which can
also
Linking Words
 be achieved by having an alternate
fuel
Use synonyms
,
aswell
Suggestion
as well
 as to decrease the usage of
plastic
Use synonyms
.
Body paragraph 2
As the earth is packed with numerous natural resources, the
probabilty
a measure of how likely it is that some event will occur; a number expressing the ratio of favorable cases to the whole number of cases possible
probability
probabilities
 of finding a
fuel
Use synonyms
 as a proxy to the
exisiting
presently existing
existing
 one's is extremely
higher
Suggestion
high
. While the Research & Development
Body paragraph 3
teams
Suggestion
Teams
 are vigorously working towards the solution to the respective issue, few of the machinery manufacturing institutions have already adopted their technology to work with
Body paragraph 4
less
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
Less
 polluting
fuels
Suggestion
fuel
.
For instance
Linking Words
, companies like Tesla and Kia designed technologies that can burn electricity
instead
Linking Words
 of diesel or petrol.
Body paragraph 5
Also
Linking Words
,
plastic
Use synonyms
 being recognised as the major pollutant in the ecosystem, there is a need to post regulations on its usage.
Although
Linking Words
 United Nations shook hands on the
Body paragraph 6
Use synonyms
plastic
Suggestion
Plastic
 control policy, most of the developing countries are facing challenges during its implementation. But, nations like USA, Canada, Australia and India are investing
Body paragraph 7
a
Suggestion
A
 major share towards environment conservation, setting an example to other
peices
a separate part of a whole
pieces
 of the world.
Body paragraph 8
In addition
Linking Words
 to having a control over
fuel
Use synonyms
 consumption, the need
to
Suggestion
for
 architecture new technology to run on different fuels and the implementation of
Conclusion
treaties
Suggestion
Treaties
 to reduce the
plastic
Use synonyms
 usage, plays a vital role in saving the environment.

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