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Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#cooperation
it
Suggestion
It
 is commonly
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
 that urgent problems can be solved only with
internaational
Suggestion
international
International
intentional
 collaboration and coordination.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 agree to
probllems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
problem
 can be solved by international
involment
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
,
there
Suggestion
There
 are
lot
Suggestion
a lot
lots
 of issues a
country
 face during its
journet
the act of traveling from one place to another
journey
-y towards
develoment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 and
stablity
the quality or attribute of being firm and steadfast
stability
.
while
Suggestion
While
achiveing
to gain with effort
achieving
 the stage of
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
buying
 stable each and every
country
 entertained itself with international help and
collaboratioon
act of working jointly
collaboration
.
without
Suggestion
Without
this
 a
country
 could not
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
archive
 the targets and goals which are highly demanding and
withouts
in absence of
without
 these a
country
 will never get
throgh
from beginning to end
through
 a hard
situations
Suggestion
situation
.
eg
Suggestion
Eg
 a
country
 having floods
anually
without missing a year
annually
only
 would be in intense need of funds and resources from other countries
otherwise
 it will be unable to
coup
brick that is laid sideways at the top of a wall
cope
 with the demands.
in
Suggestion
In
conclusion i
Accept comma addition
conclusion, I
conclusion I
 will stress upon the good international relationships among countries
for
Suggestion
from
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
buying
 a
prosperus
in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich
prosperous
 and counted in
devoloed
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
 countries.

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