The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The table illustrates the
amount
of workers both male and female employed in factories in England and Wales between the Change the quantifier
number
year
1851 and 1901.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, the amount of total employees
(male and female) has consistently depleted from 477,100 to 61,000 from the year
1851 to 1901 respectively.
The figures for the male workers is
slightly higher in comparison with their female colleagues. 1891 showed a close marking between both Correct subject-verb agreement
are
sex
with exactly 65,000 male Change to a plural noun
sexes
employees
and 40,000 female workers in that year
.
It can also
be seen that the number of factories continues to increase from 225 to 600 in the same time period, this
trend seems a little disproportionate to the amount of the
total Correct article usage
apply
employees
when compared together. The number of total employees
went down from 477,100 to 61,000. The year
1871, had the highest jump in number
Correct article usage
the number
for
factories with about Change preposition
of
200
Correct article usage
a 200
percent
increase from the previous Change the spelling
per cent
year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, employees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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