The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The table illustrates the
amount
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number
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of workers both male and female employed in factories in England and Wales between the
year
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years
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1851 and 1901.
Overall
, the amount of total
employees
(male and female) has consistently depleted from 477,100 to 61,000 from the
year
1851 to 1901 respectively. The figures for the male workers
is
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are
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slightly higher in comparison with their female colleagues. 1891 showed a close marking between both
sex
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sexes
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with exactly 65,000 male
employees
and 40,000 female workers in that
year
. It can
also
be seen that the number of factories continues to increase from 225 to 600 in the same time period,
this
trend seems a little disproportionate to the amount of
the
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total
employees
when compared together. The number of total
employees
went down from 477,100 to 61,000. The
year
1871, had the highest jump in
number
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the number
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for
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of
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factories with about
200
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a 200
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percent
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per cent
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increase from the previous
year
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, employees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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