Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is correctly said that people who are committed severe crimes should be given sentence to
death
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.
On the other hand
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, some believe that, in traditional
society
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, there should be no corporal
punishment
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. While, there are advantages and disadvantages associated with
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topic. But, in my opinion, it is better to give
death
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for committing crimes. In our
society
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, there are some individuals, who are always trying to do unsocial activities.
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off, in India, recent situation shows that the terrorists killed innocent people without any reason.
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, police authority caught these people and they will be hanged immediately. By showing
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, nobody now will have courage to do
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type of crime.
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, the famous Priyanka Reddy's Rape case, all the five criminals were encountered to
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by the police department.
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, I strongly believe that the
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penalty must be given for a proper lesson to all the individuals.
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, the contemporary
society
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believes that physical
punishment
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should be prohibited who are doing criminal violence. But it has lots of limitations.
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, now-a-days, drug addiction is very much dangerous for the young stars. If, there should not be any
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over it,
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one day, it will destroy the whole nation. Despite
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, social problems may occur for creating disturbances in
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by conducting some unsocial activities like stealing, gambling, robbery etc.
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, I believe that no
punishment
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will increase more crimes. All in all, there are a few disadvantages for the
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penalty, yet, there are a plethora of advantages over it. So, in my opinion, sentence of
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must be given for conducting criminal violence.
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, it will hamper the growth of the whole nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Advocates
  • Capital punishment
  • Contemporary society
  • Violent crimes
  • Deterrence
  • Retribution
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Imprisonment
  • Innocent
  • Unethical
  • Inhumane
  • Misuse
  • Legal systems
  • Heinous crimes
  • Closure
  • Moral concerns
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