Wealthy nations should assest poorer countried with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree.

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Wealthy Countries should help poorer

nations

with humanitarian relief during natural calamities.

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agree

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with the statement because rich

nations

have enough

resources

available

with

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them and they can afford to help them. During natural

disasters

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disasters,

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if we talk about

flood

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the flood

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, it

become

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extremly

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extremely

difficult for the

goverment

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government

to provide facilities like rescue operation to the people who are in danger as they are stuck in

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flood-affected

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flood

affected places. Since poorer

counties

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countries

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doesn't have enough

resources

like helicopter/ rescue team to rescue people from

flood affected

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flood-affected

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areas,

wealth

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nation can provide

with

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that

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resources

as they already own them. They can

also

provide weather

forcast

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forecast

technology to prevent

further

disasters.During

flood

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a flood

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in Mumbai in 2008,

help

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the

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apply

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US weather

forcast

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forecast

team, several areas

where

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were

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evicted before

flood

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the flood

a flood

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. When natural

diaster

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disaster

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takes place, the

severly

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severely

affect

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affects

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the working

for

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the

goverment

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government

as there is

huge

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loss of property, crops, life etc, because of

this

the financial condition of the country

get

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gets

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poorer. It become really difficult for the

goverment

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government

to available basic

service

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services

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to its

citizen

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citizens

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like food, clothing, shelter and medical services. Wealth nation can take a step forward to help the

natural

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naturally

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diaster

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disaster

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affected country by providing financial aid to

poorer

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the poorer

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nation as it

help

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helps

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them to lift for

natural

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a natural

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disaster.

For example

, in 2006 Sri Lanka was badly affected by

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the flood

a flood

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flood

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floods

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, so

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a country

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country

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countries

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like India

had

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not only provided financial aid but

also

provided food packets and

cloths

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clothes

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. In conclusion, rich

nations

should assist poorer

nations

during calamities as they have enough

resources

available

with

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them and they can afford to help

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Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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265 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people believe the professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?