Wealthy nations should assest poorer countried with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree.
Wealthy Countries should help poorer
nations
with humanitarian relief during natural calamities. This
essay agree
with the statement because rich Change the verb form
agrees
nations
have enough resources
available with
them and they can afford to help them. During natural Change preposition
to
disasters
if we talk about Add a comma
disasters,
flood
, it Add an article
the flood
a flood
become
Change the verb form
becomes
extremly
difficult for the Correct your spelling
extremely
goverment
to provide facilities like rescue operation to the people who are in danger as they are stuck inCorrect your spelling
government
Add a hyphen
flood-affected
flood
affected places. Since poorer counties
doesn't have enough Correct your spelling
countries
resources
like helicopter/ rescue team to rescue people from flood affected
areas, Add a hyphen
flood-affected
wealth
nation can provide Replace the word
wealthy
with
Change preposition
apply
that
Correct determiner usage
those
resources
as they already own them. They can also
provide weather forcast
technology to prevent Correct your spelling
forecast
further
disasters.During flood
in Mumbai in 2008, Add an article
a flood
the flood
help
the Wrong verb form
I helped
of
US weather Change preposition
apply
forcast
team, several areas Correct your spelling
forecast
where
evicted before Correct your spelling
were
flood
. When natural Add an article
the flood
a flood
diaster
takes place, the Correct your spelling
disaster
severly
Correct your spelling
severely
affect
the working Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
for
the Change preposition
of
goverment
as there is Correct your spelling
government
huge
loss of property, crops, life etc, because of Add an article
a huge
this
the financial condition of the country get
poorer. It become really difficult for the Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
goverment
to available basic Correct your spelling
government
service
to its Fix the agreement mistake
services
citizen
like food, clothing, shelter and medical services. Wealth nation can take a step forward to help the Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
natural
Change the word
naturally
diaster
affected country by providing financial aid to Correct your spelling
disaster
poorer
nation as it Add an article
the poorer
help
them to lift for Change the verb form
helps
natural
disaster.Add an article
a natural
For example
, in 2006 Sri Lanka was badly affected by Add an article
the flood
a flood
flood
, so Fix the agreement mistake
floods
Add an article
a country
country
like India Fix the agreement mistake
countries
had
not only provided financial aid but Unnecessary verb
apply
also
provided food packets and cloths
. In conclusion, rich Correct your spelling
clothes
nations
should assist poorer nations
during calamities as they have enough resources
available with
them and they can afford to helpChange preposition
to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite