what are the causes of overpopulation ? what are the solutions ?

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In many cities around the world, rapid increase in
population
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has become a serious problem. Illiteracy and
lack
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of
awareness
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are the main causative
factors but
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factors, but
these problems do have a solution if preventive measures are taken by the government at national level. The main reason behind
population
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explosion is
lack
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of education amongst
people
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the people
. People are unaware of the fact the
child birth
the parturition process in human beings; having a baby; the process of giving birth to a child
childbirth
brings along with it a lot of responsibilities like feeding him and giving him adequate health care.
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has been proven in many surveys,
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, that illiterate people have the maximum number of children as they are not aware of the consequences of a huge family with
large number
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a large number
of children. Another reason behind
rapid increase
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the rapid increase
in
population
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is
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lack
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the lack
of
awareness
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amongst the people about the contraceptive techniques.
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problem is prevalent even amongst the learned people. Even nowadays, couples only know about the condom as the only method of contraception and they do not use it as it interferes with their sexual pleasure.
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lack
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of knowledge about the contraception injections, male and female sterilization techniques
have resulted
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has resulted
in overpopulation.
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, just like every problem the rapid increase in
population
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also
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has solutions. The most important being, creating
awareness
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amongst the masses about
hazards
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the hazards
of
population
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explosion.
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, it can lead to a limited food supply to children leading to starvation, there can be
paucity
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a paucity
of medical supplies leading to increased health related problems
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.
we
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We
can create
awareness
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in several ways: arranging lectures on contraception, displaying banners on
streets
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the streets
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,
social media campaigns and the best one would be free condoms for all and free male and female sterilization operations
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The overpopulation of cities is an emergency in major cities and it should be controlled at an early stage with proper
awareness
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campaigns.
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