The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
The graph illustrates the
amount
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number
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of people in percentage, who
visits
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visit
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cinemas in a particular European nation from Monday to Sunday in the years 2003,2005 and 2007.
Overall
, the most preferred day to visit the cinema is on a Saturday with over 40%.
Furthermore
, Monday
seem
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seems
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to be the
least
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last
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day in demand to watch a movie with merely 15%. It can be seen from the chart, the weekends have a higher amount of traffic with attendance percentage ranging to exactly 40%,45% and 43% on a Saturday for the years 2003,2005 and 2007.
Additionally
, Sunday’s average attendance is around 33% of the
residence
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residents
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that
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apply
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find leisure viewing convenient on
this
day.
Similarly
, the number of people who attends on a Friday
seem
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seems
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to have an equal figure of only 30% in the three years in question. Meanwhile, Wednesday
seem
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seems
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to have the most varied amount of visits for the three-year period in view with around 15%,13% and 8% respectively.
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