The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
The graph illustrates the
amount
of people in percentage, who Change the quantifier
number
visits
cinemas in a particular European nation from Monday to Sunday in the years 2003,2005 and 2007.
Correct subject-verb agreement
visit
Overall
, the most preferred day to visit the cinema is on a Saturday with over 40%. Furthermore
, Monday seem
to be the Change the verb form
seems
least
day in demand to watch a movie with merely 15%.
It can be seen from the chart, the weekends have a higher amount of traffic with attendance percentage ranging to exactly 40%,45% and 43% on a Saturday for the years 2003,2005 and 2007. Correct your spelling
last
Additionally
, Sunday’s average attendance is around 33% of the residence
Replace the word
residents
that
find leisure viewing convenient on Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
day.
Similarly
, the number of people who attends on a Friday seem
to have an equal figure of only 30% in the three years in question. Meanwhile, Wednesday Change the verb form
seems
seem
to have the most varied amount of visits for the three-year period in view with around 15%,13% and 8% respectively.Change the verb form
seems
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