The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The graph illustrates the

amount

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of people in percentage, who

visits

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visit

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cinemas in a particular European nation from Monday to Sunday in the years 2003,2005 and 2007.

Overall

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, the most preferred day to visit the cinema is on a Saturday with over 40%.

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, Monday

seem

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to be the

least

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last

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day in demand to watch a movie with merely 15%. It can be seen from the chart, the weekends have a higher amount of traffic with attendance percentage ranging to exactly 40%,45% and 43% on a Saturday for the years 2003,2005 and 2007.

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, Sunday’s average attendance is around 33% of the

residence

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residents

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that

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apply

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find leisure viewing convenient on

this

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day.

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, the number of people who attends on a Friday

seem

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seems

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to have an equal figure of only 30% in the three years in question. Meanwhile, Wednesday

seem

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seems

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to have the most varied amount of visits for the three-year period in view with around 15%,13% and 8% respectively.