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some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #e-books #technology #newspaper #magazines
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Science and
technology
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plays
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will play
play
 a vital role in today's modern world and which makes things
more easier
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easier
.Everything has some replacement in
this
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competative
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
 world
,
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,
 by the way modern
technology
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 and e-books
replaces
Suggestion
replace
 traditional news
papper
a material made of cellulose pulp derived mainly from wood or rags or certain grasses
paper
pepper
papers
 but not completely.
This
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 is because of the revolution happened in science and
technology
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,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am strongly agree
Suggestion
strongly agree
 with it. Previously
,
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,
 we need to wait a lot of time to know about the social issues
,
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,
 new laws implemented by government and so many things happening in and around us.But now a days everything is
accesible
capable of being reached
accessible
 quickly and we can update
ourself
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
,
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,
this
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 is the reflection of modern
technology
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.
For instance
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,
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,
Older days to communicate, we used letter. It will take maximum time duration to reach the destination
,
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,
overthere
Suggestion
over there
 we
intensed
resulting from one's intentions
intended
 to wait a long period. But with the help of modern
technlogy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
,
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,
 we are achieving the data transfer
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a fraction of seconds through electronic mail. Lets have a look on to E-book, students got suffered a lot because of
dozzen
a large number or amount
dozens
 of books and notes which they need to take while heading to school or college
.
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.
 But
,
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,
 the arrival of e-books has
became
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become
 the solution for pupil's
suffer
free from danger or the risk of harm
safer
. Students can study
with out
in absence of
without
 the help of lecturer using e-books
by
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of
 their own. In conclusion
,
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,
 development will come
by
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with
 the arrival of new things which will replace the older one.
Every thing
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Everything
 has pros and cons like a two sides of
coin
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the coin
a coin
, we should take it in
apositive
Suggestion
a positive
 way to achieve
noval
an extended fictional work in prose; usually in the form of a story
novel
naval
 ideas.

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