Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be been seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and gives your opinion.

It is argued by some that movies can be watched by the means of gadgets
such
as tablets and smartphones, and there is no point to go to the
movie
theatres,
however
, others disagree. In
this
essay both views will be discussed and I will express my opinion at the end. In recent years, technology advancement has changed individual's lives, and with the help of which, movies are accessible by touch of a finger. To illustrate an example, the individuals could watch a film as they are lying in their beds and having some snacks.
Such
can provide them with convenience and make them needless to go to the show theatres.
However
, people should consider the merits that they are losing
such
as fantastic sound and screen quality.
On the contrary
, others believe watching motion pictures in the
movie
house has its own benefits. They opine that films should be watched at of most quality, both in sound and screen.
For instance
, the experience of watching a 3D film in the
cinema
cannot be compared with watching it in a tiny smartphone.
Besides
, the producers spend their budget on the films in order to gain some profits, which attending to the
cinema
is a way to appreciate their hard works and efforts.
Thus
, going to the
cinema
will facilitate the money changeover, which might lead to the revival of the
cinema
industry. To conclude, while some argue that with the help of tablets, going to the
movie
house to watch a film is an absurd task, I believe watching movies in the
movie
theatres is a joyful experience and not only does it provides us with watching films in high quality
enviroments but
Accept comma addition
environments, but
environments but
also
it is our way of appreciation to the efforts that have been made by hundreds of people who work in the
cinema
industry.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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