The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.
The pie chart illustrates the way spending and consumption of resources by nations of the
world
and
population
distribution. Units measured in percentage.
Overall
, the
world
spending is majorly on other expenditures with exactly 40%. The
world
population
,
however
, is predominantly Asia with 57%. The resources are mostly consumed by USA and Europe with 60%. The highest purchases made by the
world
population
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others at 40%, food is another major expense with 24%.
Moreover
, transportation and housing came in
closely
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at 18% and 12% respectively. With very few people buying clothing.
In contrast
, to the large Asian
population
, Africa has the lowest amount of people in the
world
with only 10%. Leaving Europe and America in the middle with
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at 14%. USA and Europe are the main nations who consume the resources the most in the
world
,
while
other unnamed nations used up the remaining 40%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words world, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • data
  • spending habits
  • consumption
  • resources
  • population distribution
  • comparison
  • patterns
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • implications
  • disparities
  • environmental consequences
  • social impacts
  • sustainability
  • economic development
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