Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the present, people are living in a modern lifestyle and upgrade with a new generation of new trends.

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our new youth has believed the history his not important to live in that current time.

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, in the past, many

situations

a facility equipped with special equipment and personnel for a particular purpose

stations

were

created but

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created, but

young people have not accepted those things. If asked to support, I practically believe that statement and will be elaborated

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. Generally, our youth

are

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most of the information that they do not trust to work in the

future

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because they have not aware and it

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believes in the present situation.

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, in the past, all mankind has an unexpected experience that

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exert oneself by doing mental or physical work for a purpose or out of necessity

work

in the

future

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, the student had to study in their

life but

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life, but

sometimes they have to feel it is worthy.

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, in school life they had to study the basic knowledge they have to study in the

future

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also

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its not worthy of them.

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, past learning is more important to new people.

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, sometimes they are right about the past to think to not value in the

future

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;

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, past learning is worthy for present people.

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, the current generation believes in change with new trends and

life-style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

lifestyles

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, In the past time, people

are communicating

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were communicating

with the latter and

birds but

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birds, but

in recent times young people accept the new technology

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batter

something superior in quality or condition or effect

better

for communication. So, the past is not perfect for today’s humans. To conclude, most of the people

are not accept

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are not accepting

have not accepted

don't accept

do not accept

history but

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history, but

in some cases, they have to believe and some other type of they

can not

cannot

trust in past learning because they habited to the new orientation. In my opinion, both situations are important these days.

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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