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"Science and technology has made people's life easy." Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, science has played an important role in our lives. We can see the wonders of
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 all around us everyday and we use them in
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 to make our day better. There is no denying the fact that Science and
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 have made our life easier and
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 essay will discuss about the same. In the past, travelling from one place to another took days or even weeks, but after the invention of Trains, Buses, we can reach to our destination within hours. These inventions not only helped us in travel but
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 brought employment and became the source of income for many people. Apart from that, the most important invention of
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 is the Internet. The Internet has now become an important aspect of our lives.
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, we used to wait for weeks in
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 to know the welfare of our dear ones and now we can simply email them in seconds. The
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 is advancing day by day,
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 of which we are able to see more and more inventions everyday. We are living in the world of robots and artificial intelligence and we can see both in most of the machines now.
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, Tesla motors, a world famous car manufacturer, build auto driver electric cars. We don't need a driver in
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 to drive that car. We can now
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 food online and pay for the same online. In conclusion, science has improved our way of living and help us in everyday tasks. The advancement in
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 not only creates new products but
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 gives employment to a large number of people. We are using machines for almost all things and
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 it concludes that science and
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 has made our lives easier.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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