Using a computer every day can have more negative that positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

Up to the point, the above given statement is absolutely true. Technology nowadays has become the game changer of the human life which in fact influencing the kids too. In olden days, when there were no proper technology people used to play outdoor games and used to be more active. Technology wise what we are benefiting today is must for the present generation, but when coming to kids it may lead to various side effects.
On the other hand
, computers and laptops are used in every house because of their work or some use for gaming. But, children are showing the uttermost importance to these devices,
moreover
parent's are encouraging their children to use
this
. But parent's have to notice that, certainly
this
gonna become habit for their children which could lead to many side effects life, eyesight neck pain and sometimes children could lose their eyesight as well.
This
is not only happening with computers but
also
with other electronic device as well. Children could become smarter by using these devices, but eventually its gonna harm them in the long run. In my opinion, parent's have to stop their children using these devices and make them to be more proactive on other games. Because, it noticed that negative effects are more than positive effects. Making them read books and taking them for an evening walk or joining them in any sports coaching centres will have a chance of eradicating the problem.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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