government should spend money on railways rather than roads . to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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government

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Government

expenses relay on development, and how the

government

should spend their money or capital

assests

anything of material value or usefulness that is owned by a person or company

assets

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should

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Should

be spent it on improving railways or roads

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essay,

refers to the speaker or writer

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to highlight

on both advantages and disadvantages

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firstly

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refers to the speaker or writer

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the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention

will

start

discuss

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discussing

the advantages of improving the

high way

a major road for any form of motor transport

highway

roads, that links cities between each other.

the

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The

road ways

a road (especially that part of a road) over which vehicles travel

roadways

road was

use for several purposes and used by so many kinds of

transportation

means,

such

as, motorcycle, cars,

coachs

(sports) someone in charge of training an athlete or a team

coaches

and trams.

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can be taken

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the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

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issues.

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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

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side

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this

transportation

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the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

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a result

, they gain extra time that will lose by using roads, not only time, but

also

save money.

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other

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means

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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

and negative

side

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sides

for both railways and roads

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viewpoint, the

government

should orient of consumption on railway that due to the fact of cost and affordable prices that railway

transportation

means offered to

population

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the population

, not only that but

also

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the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time

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solutions that trains offered.

Fri Feb 14 2020

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sustainability
environmental footprint
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