More students are travelling abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it?
The number of students travelling internationally, to seek higher
education
is increasing in recent years. While some people argue that studying abroad is beneficial for the students, others suggest that its disadvantages outweigh the advantages. I strongly believe that the choice of study-abroad carries many benefits.
Firstly
, I think that international travelling for education
is a positive experience
for many students because of the versatile subjects which they can select when they plan to study abroad. For example
, many students in Pakistan who have an interest in the field of journalism choose to study in the renowned institutions like London School of Economics (LSE), U.K. because
it makes them capable enough to pursue their interest. Suggestion
Because
This
is because Pakistan does not have an institute par excellence
which can provide the students with the best knowledge in journalism.
Suggestion
excellent
Secondly
, travelling abroad for higher education
offers an opportunity to experience
a new culture. For instance
, through the Erasmus program Spanish children can study in the United Kingdom. This
helps them develop English language skills of the country they are visiting. Furthermore
, they can learn in a system that is
different from their country. This
is truly an invaluable experience
for any person who wishes to enlighten their education
.
To conclude, the idea of studying abroad can be extremely helpful for people, especially for the ones who wish to groom themselves. It can also
be an incredible experience
for those who are ready to chase their dreams.Submitted by dr.rabeeashah on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...