At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Overpopulation has been a rising concern in numerous countries, whether developing or not, wherein the number of younger adults now becomes dominated.
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means that, once overpopulation occurs, more sources of labour will be available which highly likely boost the mentioned demands of one nation. Linking Words
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, China, where the highest population can be found, and at the same time, the industrialization here is rapid due to the significant number of labourers at many factories. Linking Words
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, China has become one of the biggest markets in the world's economy and exporting industry.
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rising population positively affects many a country's economic requirements, the trend has certain repercussions of environmental and accommodation issues. More people mean more wastes in the environment. Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...