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Government investment in arts such as music and theaters is a waste of money. Government must invest that money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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Up to the point, the above given statement is absolutely true. Nowadays, we could see the
government
 is contributing lots of money on theatres. The job of the
government
 is to provide service to the people service, for which we have elected them.
Instead
, they are pairing up with the commercial and business people and investing more money in their fields.
Government
 has the responsibility of taking care of the people who are working in the
government
 sectors as well. Because most of the old age people are serving in
government
 more than 35 years.
Moreover
, the people who have more service in the
government
 are not getting their pensions and GD on time. The main reason for
this
 is
government
 is least bothered about
this
 and they are uttermost interested in increasing their wealth.
On the other hand
, not only
government
 but the people who are working under
government
 are
also
 corrupted and they are looting from the poor people
instead
 of helping them. We could see lots people who are facing difficulties in getting their income from higher authorities for many months. Politicians are bound up with business people and investing public money. In my opinion,
government
 should involve and help people who are not reaching their needs which they supposed to get. In some villages there are no proper hospitals and proper schools, they are not getting any help from the officials. I hope at least now
government
 realizes and start helping people and making their needs reached to them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural enrichment
  • National identity
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Economic stimulus
  • Heritage preservation
  • Infrastructure
  • Social welfare
  • Quality of life
  • Educational outreach
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  • Civic engagement
  • Mental well-being
  • Arts advocacy
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