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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Some linguistics researchers believe that society will use one chosen language in the future. From my perspective,
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 situation brings about more challenges, and
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 an opinion. To start with, there is no denying the fact that the way people talk to each other is an essential part of their culture, and,
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, national heritage. It is obviously impossible to save the regional values without speaking the mother tongue. As an illustration, I remember how the regional languages in the Soviet Union were mistreated, leading to the disruption of their cultures. Parents were not able to teach their children appropriately, so a great part of the national history was forgotten at that time.
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, many individuals will lose their jobs because of the transition to one language only. The manifold of people currently have
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 occupations as interpreters, linguists and mobile translators' developers.
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, about 10% of students in Russia study at linguistics faculties to become experts and get a tempting offer from a multicultural company.
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 of one tongue proliferation, they will be forced to change their studying and working field to meet the needs of the new reality. In conclusion, I want to emphasise the fact that society should remain multilingual to preserve its regional differences and prevent possible surges in the variety of occupations.
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, I believe that communities are in charge of their heritage`s conservation. These could be achieved by implementing various lessons at schools and encouraging people to speak their native dialects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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