Now people performed everyday task such as banking shopping and business transactions without meeting one another. What possible effects in individuals and society. what are socialized drawbacks on this concept against benefit. Give reason for answer.
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is commenly believe
that, in the modern Suggestion
is commonly believed
is commonly believe
is communally believe
world
, persons are doing daily activities such
as banking,
shopping and trade transactions through the Accept space
,
internet
by using computer
without meeting any human Suggestion
a computer
the computer
computers
been
the state or fact of existing
being
personaly
. as yourself
personally
personal
Although
,
it is very effective to grow up their business. Not only that, it Accept space
,
definitely help
to save the Suggestion
definitely helps
time
. However
, when discussing above topic, there are some socialized disadvantages as well.
To start with, the time
is the predominant and powerful resource in the wirld
. Doing daily activities via everything that exists anywhere
world
internet
we can save huge Suggestion
the internet
an internet
time
. Not only time
, but also
money is the wealth as countless asset for human been
in the the state or fact of existing
being
world
. Nowadays people can do their daily work without meeting any person. They do not need to wait at
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in
long queue
and Suggestion
long queues
a long queue
the long queue
traver
place to place as well. Suggestion
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travel
For instance
, we can shopping through internet
. We can do coparison
about prices, the act of examining resemblances
comparison
paterns
a perceptual structure
patterns
,
colours and Accept space
,
then
order to perchase
goods as well. obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
purchase
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believe that doing day Accept comma addition
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today
activities by using Suggestion
to day
techonology
is beneficial for mankind.
For the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
moreover
, there are many merits for society
which can receive by using Suggestion
a society
internet
to daiy
routine. In the modern time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis
day
daily
world
all the economics are globazied
. Consequently
of that, every economy has to play major role in the society. In the word market have huge transactions to do every moment. They can not Suggestion
The consequence
Consequence
wast
spend thoughtlessly; throw away
waste
time
. It is possible to do activities through tecnology
. the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
For instance
, if some one
wants to sell something, that a human being
someone
person no
need to go here and there to meet people. It is the foremost benefit which can receive by Accept comma addition
person, no
internet
. People able to do their work by using new techonology society
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technology, society
technology society
technologies society
is gradually growing
up. It is Suggestion
are gradually growing
a
advantage of Suggestion
an
this
topic.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages from this
scenario. People can not
mingle with others and share their ideas physically. There become can not
cannot
dependers
on computers and be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depends
sufferinf
from a state of acute pain
suffering
mentaly
stress.They involving the mind or an intellectual process
mental
refues
their sense about others by spending life without meeting people physically.
In conclusion, perform daily task only through the show unwillingness towards
refuse
techonology
is very effective to win the the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
world
and their goals. But human been
must have some the state or fact of existing
being
sence
about others as well. It is very possible to use a general conscious awareness
sense
scenes
internet
with balancing both sides of above topic
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the above topic
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