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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports and music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become good sport person or musician. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.

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The perception that some persons are naturally endowed with ce
rtain
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a certain skill,
a certain skill, of
certain skills, of
skill
, of which are lacking in others have been a critical issue. They believed that it is
this
skill
 in these persons that make them more successful than others, which opposes adequate training as held by others. In
this
 essay I will discuss both views and give a reasoned opinion at the end. Natural endowment has a great role in sports and music. It is believed that with
this
 in place, the little effort of these persons will yield gr
eat result b
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great results
a great result
ecause of these traits they possess. Observation of the Brazilian's in the 80's, showed that most world football stars are from Brazil, owing to the finding that they possess a certain
skill
 that enable the manoeuvre and great
skill
 in the pitch. With
this
 in mind, one will convincingly agree that certain talents in an individual is
a
Suggestion
are
 prerequisite for
success
 in so
me c
one or some or every or all without specification
any
areer. But can
this
 be the only way?
On the other hand
, proper training and determination ha
s
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have also shown
had also shown
also
 shown to make a star in any field. When a ch
ild
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child, for
for example
 chooses to make a career in music, with proper training and determination fr
om t
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of
he child,
success
 can be assured. In the world of lawn Tennis, Rogers Fe
derra,
any federal law-enforcement officer
Federal
never attributed his
success
 to ta
lent but r
Accept comma addition
talent, but
igorous training he underwent before the match day. They are people in different field of discipline, who never looked talented, but are making waves in their fields. They are trained and determined to make the most out of it and did it. So proper training given to any individual at the right time can make an
g
Suggestion
a
ood star in any career talent notwithstanding.
However
, according to human development expert, John Maxwell, he said,"talent is not enough". There is a place of talents in facilitating the
success
 and rise of an individual, but with adequate training, a determination mo
re chances a
Accept comma addition
more, chances
re there that
such
 an individual will achieve gr
eat result.
Suggestion
great results
a great result
The combination of both can fast track any person in his pursuit.
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