Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes argued that the balance between the number of female and male students should be maintained in all degree courses in universities.

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, I do not agree with

this

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idea. The main reason why I believe that institutions should maintain the same number for both genders is that the number of students in every

courses

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course

depends on the quality of those courses.

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, engineering courses tend to attract more male candidates. The main requirement of

this

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course is strong physical ability and male applicants can meet

this

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requirement while female applicants lack of strong physical ability.

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, nursing courses fit better for female students.

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this

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course, tenderness, which is impossible for males, plays an important role.

On the other hand

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universities’

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university

admissions

is based

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are based

on talent and performance of candidates.

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, the balance numbers of

genders

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the genders

is not considered

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are not considered

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, there is an equal proportion of each gender in a university and one gender is

first

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for foremost while the other genders to have

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competed

intensely.

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, there will unfair to have an opportunity to enter the university.

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, we can lose a lot of merit students, which is a damage for universities. In conclusion, it is wrong to balance between genders in any courses of a university, and the selection of

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university

students must be based on merit.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

226 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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