Some people say that protecting the environment is the government responsibility. Other belive that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both view and give your own opinions.

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Global warming
have become
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has become
is becoming
a major concern
accross
to the opposite side
across
the globe. Every individual should be involved
for
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in
avaoding
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoiding
degradation of environment,
although
some consider the
compelte
having every necessary or normal part or component or step
complete
computer
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
lies with
government
. In my opinion, both are equally responsible for safeguarding mother
nature but
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nature, but
government
can be a key factor. Rapid
growth
in the field of science and technologies
have given
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has given
tremendous
growth
in almost all the sectors. Increased industrialization and construction of
new building
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new buildings
the new building
a new building
are the major reasons for
depleation
the act of decreasing something markedly
depletion
of flora and
fona
all the animal life in a particular region or period
fauna
. Every person
nowadays care
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nowadays cares
for self
growth
and ignore the impact of swift
delevopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
done by reducing
number
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the number
of forests.
For example
, many trees are chopped in
mumbai
a city in western India just off the coast of the Arabian Sea; India's most populous city; has the only natural deep-water harbor in western India
Mumbai
for the construction of metro services in the city.
However
, many NGO's came in front against the act and showed the
repsonsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of an individual for the
envirornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
Goverment
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Governments
Government
The government
have control in governing all sorts of developments and can take necessary action to reduce the impact of
growth
in
environment
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an environment
the environment
. Many laws can be applied to take strict action the companies, violating rules and
regualtion
an authoritative rule
regulations
causing harm to the
nature
. Awareness campaign can be
orgainised
formed into a structured or coherent whole
organized
agonized
to make every aware about the importance of environment.
For example
,
government
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the government
can introduce budget
sepcially
in a special manner
specially
for the improvement of
nature
.
Government
been the central body, can govern all activities and plan activities
accordingly
. In conclusion, both individual and
government
together be
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together is
the main factor in
restoration
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the restoration
and control bodies
for
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of
in
nature
. I believe
government
can change the way we consider the importance of same in our day to day life.

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