Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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According to some people, these days we can choose from an excessively wide variety of goods be it for

education

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, materials, holidays, food, among others. Personally, I think that we do actually have many choices and I will explain the reasons why.

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, we have many options when it comes to

education

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. Students in secondary schools can opt for subjects they want to do. As a matter of fact, nowadays there are even more subjects which are being added

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as entrepreneurship, marine studies and basic psychology.

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allows the students to have an aperçu of various fields of study and

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they can choose precisely what they want to do at tertiary level.

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, not just in

education

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but in many areas of

consumerism

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consumerism, such

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as electronics and cars, people have a choice between goods which differ in terms of country of origin, price, quality, specifications, additional features, colour and so on. It is but reasonable that consumers are presented with different products for comparison so that they can buy the one most adapted to their need or want. A

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area where an individual has a huge number of choices is while deciding for the holidays be it for destination countries, hotels,

airbnb

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and places to visit. Many travel agencies offer different packages, sometimes the same package is proposed at a cheaper price in other agencies. In

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situation it

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situation, it

is good to have a plethora of options so as to choose the best and the most suited.

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, by going through many advertisements, people can discover about facilities that they were ignorant before. Admittedly, it is true that sometimes having a large number of choices can be time consuming

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example looking

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example, looking

at different brands of a particular basic good which probably differ only in the country of origin.

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, it is always a smart idea to compare and choose the perfect good. In conclusion, I believe that in today’s world, we have many options to choose

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from, such

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as in the area of

education

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, consumerism and holiday.

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

overwhelmed
decision fatigue
paralysis by analysis
consumerism
globalization
personal autonomy
market saturation
option overload
decision-making process
psychological well-being
buyer's remorse
customization
trade-offs
minimalism
information superhighway

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

The percentage of overweight children in westrn society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.

To what extent do you agree that the men and women should do the same job as each other.

These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.