Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Teaching children what is wrong or
right
is not always easy, in
fact there
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fact, there
are many ways to do it and depends
of
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on
the father or tutor which takes that responsibility. Some of them prefer teaching with
punishment but
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punishment, but
others just feel
that is
not a good
way
to learn. The past generation grew up learning about life in a very different
way
than nowadays. In those years it was very common that, if you did something wrong, you must receive a
punishment
like a pull of years or a little hit in the chick. It was
also
common to restrict the liberty by not allowing the children to do something they like as eating some candy or
desert
a dish served as the last course of a meal
dessert
, or even playing with their friends. In my opinion, the
punishment
is an effective
way
to teach children what is wrong or
right
. I think that, while you grow up, you need someone or something to show you that life has some limits, that there are things that are
right
and there are others that are not. In my
experience my father
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experience, my father
always
said
express in words
told
me to do the
right
thing, and, as a man of faith, he always teaches us to do what Jesus would do in a particular situation.
For example
, if two brothers
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
fighting he
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fighting, he
ask us: what Jesus would do in
this
situation? So, they understood that fighting is not a good
way
to solve differences.
However
, in other situations, it was necessary to take a different
way
and sometimes a
punishment
was the most effective. I remember
to go
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going
to bed without eating my favourite dessert after dinner and that was
devastating but
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devastating, but
, after that, I learnt the message. In conclusion, I think it is all about an equilibrium between being very strict and punishing with hard ways or very soft and never punish or say anything. The most important is that children can actually learn what is wrong or what is
right
so that they can grow up and reach their dreams.
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