You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter. Explain when and from where you rented it Describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about a minor accident, which took place yesterday and I have a complaint

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police

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the police

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station against the culprit. I had rented

car

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a car

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from the

wallstreet

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Wallstreet

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branch of your company on 12th

feburary

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February

2020. I requested for

a sedan cars

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sedan cars

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as will be along with my family going on 3 days

outsattion

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outstation

trip. While

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apply

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returning home, we

haulted

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halted

at a

restuarent

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restaurant

for refreshments,

were

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where

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a biker tried to pass between the wall and our vehicle. In

this

process

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he broke the

passenfer

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passenger

side

rear view

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rearview

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mirror and flew away.

However

, luckily, I noted his plate number and

immediatly

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immediately

logded

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logged

lodged

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complaint against him. A copy of the car rental and police complaint is enclosed with

this

letter. The broken

rear view

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rearview

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mirror has been kept in

the cars trunk

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the trunk of the car

the car's trunk

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. I assume the mirror can

be fix

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using the same handle. In case, any

futher

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further

infomation

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information

required

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. Please feel free to contact me on my mobile number mention in the rental form. Yours

Faithfuly

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Faithfully

, Abhishek Agrawal

Submitted by abhi on Sat Feb 15 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter. Explain when and from where you rented it Describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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