You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter. Explain when and from where you rented it Describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about a minor accident, which took place yesterday and I have a complaint
in
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police
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station against the culprit. I had rented
car
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from the
wallstreet
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Wallstreet
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branch of your company on 12th
feburary
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February
2020. I requested for
a sedan cars
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sedan cars
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as will be along with my family going on 3 days
outsattion
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outstation
trip. While
,
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returning home, we
haulted
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halted
at a
restuarent
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restaurant
for refreshments,
were
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where
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a biker tried to pass between the wall and our vehicle. In
this
process
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he broke the
passenfer
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passenger
side
rear view
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rearview
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mirror and flew away.
However
, luckily, I noted his plate number and
immediatly
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immediately
logded
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logged
lodged
an
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complaint against him. A copy of the car rental and police complaint is enclosed with
this
letter. The broken
rear view
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mirror has been kept in
the cars trunk
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the trunk of the car
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. I assume the mirror can
be fix
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using the same handle. In case, any
futher
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further
infomation
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information
required
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. Please feel free to contact me on my mobile number mention in the rental form. Yours
Faithfuly
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Faithfully
, Abhishek Agrawal
Submitted by abhi on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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