You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house In your letter describe Yourself and your family Which area you would like to live in And what facilities you need in the house.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to enquire about, a house for rent. As
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I have been personally recommended by a friend about your superior quality service.
Hence
, I would request
to
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suggest a house for me, as per the requirement stated below. I am a young doctor, who will be immigrating along with my wife in the
first
week of July 2020. As, I will be practising in
Healthcare
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a Healthcare
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hospital, Carlton
road
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, Toronto. It would be preferred if the house is near to the hospital.
Furthermore
, I have a
short list
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of features that the apartment should have.
Firstly
,
fully-furnished
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fully furnished
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, as
i
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I
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will be new to the place and look to quickly settle in. Another is
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one bedroom on
10th
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the 10th
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floor or above with
north facing
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window.
However
, I am open to suggestions.
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I Hope
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, you will get back with the best match
within
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a reasonable price. Please feel free to contact me on the mobile number given below.
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Your
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Yours
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faithfully, Abhishek Agrawal
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