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SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD INDUSTRIES IN THE SAME WAY THAT REGULATES THE DRUG, ALCOHOL AND TOBACCO INDUSTRIES

#government #food #industries #drug #alcohol #tobacco
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this
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 day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether government ban the fast
food
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 like the same way as the
drug
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,
alcohol
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 and
tobacco
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 industries or not. I myself believe that the government should not harshly prevent the fast
food
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 as same as the
drug
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,
alcohol
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 and
tobacco
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 industries. It is clear that fast
food
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 has an important role play in human life as well as the benefits of fast for the sociable purposes.
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, eating fast
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 is absolutely convenient, especially in terms of the people do not have time to cook and prepare. To be more specific, the fast
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 is immensely appealing in favour of the diversity of these industries, which makes many people easily choose their own favourite meal as well as the unnecessary time-consuming to cook.
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, those people do not have time and always bombard with a large of jobs that results in they can balance their works and the adequate nutrients for their health. Despite the drawbacks of fast
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 sometimes indirectly effect on some aspects of life, but fast
food
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 are not really dangerous like the
drug
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,
alcohol
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 and
tobacco
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 impact on social. To be more clear, abuse of amount of fast
food
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 in the long period that leads to some diseases
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 as obesity, especially in the teenagers and offsprings generation.
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, the adverse devastating effects of using the
drug
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,
alcohol
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 and
tobacco
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 that result in many people can not aware of their behaviours that lead to crime, violence, addiction. In conclusion, I believe that it is more beneficial for the government to adjust the laws to manage the fast
food
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 markets in the less strict ways than the
drug
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,
alcohol
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, and
tobacco
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 industries.
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