The diagram below shows the number of landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period.
The bar chart illustrates the oil
production
of OPEC
and non-
OPEC
countries over 40 years
.
The production
of oil drastically increased from 11 million
between 1980-2000 to its highest of 19 million
barrels per day in the first decade of the 21st century. However
, The production
reduced slightly by about 1 million
barrels per day over the next
10 years
.
Also
, the production
saw a steep shift from Non-
OPEC
dominance in the last
decade of the 20th century to the
Correct article usage
apply
OPEC
dominance in the first 20 years
of the 21st century of which the Middle East was the largest producer. The total amount produced by OPEC
countries was only 3 million
coming from the Middle East in the period between 1980 - 2000 in comparison to non-
OPEC
with 8 million
barrels. However
, the numbers changed significantly over the next
20 years
with OPEC
countries producing 13 million
and non-
OPEC
producing only 5 million
in the first 10 years
and OPEC
producing 18 million
and non-
OPEC
only producing 2 million
in the next
decade.
In conclusion, Overall
oil production
saw a steep increase from the 1980s to the early 2000s post which it stabilized.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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