The diagram below shows the number of landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period.

The diagram below shows the number of landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period.
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The bar chart illustrates the oil
production
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of
OPEC
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and
non-
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OPEC
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countries over 40
years
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. The
production
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of oil drastically increased from 11
million
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between 1980-2000 to its highest of 19
million
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barrels per day in the first decade of the 21st century.
However
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, The
production
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reduced slightly by about 1
million
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barrels per day over the
next
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10
years
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.
Also
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, the
production
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saw a steep shift from
Non-
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OPEC
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dominance in the
last
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decade of the 20th century to
the
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OPEC
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dominance in the first 20
years
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of the 21st century of which the Middle East was the largest producer. The total amount produced by
OPEC
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countries was only 3
million
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coming from the Middle East in the period between 1980 - 2000 in comparison to
non-
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OPEC
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with 8
million
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barrels.
However
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, the numbers changed significantly over the
next
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20
years
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with
OPEC
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countries producing 13
million
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and
non-
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OPEC
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producing only 5
million
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in the first 10
years
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and
OPEC
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producing 18
million
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and
non-
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OPEC
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only producing 2
million
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in the
next
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decade. In conclusion,
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oil
production
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saw a steep increase from the 1980s to the early 2000s post which it stabilized.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, next".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, opec, non-opec, years, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "steep" was used 2 times.
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