You have recently moved to a new neighborhood. Write a letter to a friend about your new neighborhood. In your letter: Describe the new neighborhood Explain why you moved there Talk about your neighbors Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#neighborhood #friend #neighbors #addresses

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Dear Maninder, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I

have

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moved to my new address in Model Town

last

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week.

This

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area has all the necessary amenities at

a walking distances

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walking distances

a walking distance

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such

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supermarket

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a supermarket

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, hospital etc.

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, a beautiful park is around the next block, which is equipped with jogging and cycling tracks. As you are aware of the fact that I purchased

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land in Model Town

few

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years ago, and

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year I decided to construct a house on

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land. The construction

begun

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in March and

completed

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was completed

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in December.

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, after

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the complition

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complition

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competition

me and my family shifted here.

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, it is a very peaceful locality, and I

got

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have

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very

co-operative

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cooperative

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and supportive neighbours too. Mr Sharma and Mr Singh are my

next door

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next-door

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neighbours. Both of them are in Government Jobs and they helped me a lot to shift and settle in

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new area.

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, I would use

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opportunity to invite you

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my new place. I hope you will try to spare some time out of your busy schedule and visit me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly, Jatinder.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider breaking down your paragraphs more distinctly. Each paragraph should focus on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure consistency in verb tense usage to maintain logical flow, particularly when transitioning from past actions to current situations.

Task Achievement

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, making it suitable for writing to a friend.

Task Achievement

The use of specific examples, such as mentioning the park and the supermarket, enriches the description of the neighborhood.

Coherence and Cohesion

The introduction and closing of the letter are appropriate and well executed.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

200 words

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