In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
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problem
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think
this
, the most viables
solution is a public awareness campaign about those crimes which have been omitted from their areas.
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, The Hindustan Times conducted a survey in Bangladesh and asked to 50 people that they are more safer
than before in terms of Suggestion
safer
crime
. About 72% concluded that the crime
might be happen
at anytime that they all have some fear.
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problem
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more securely
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then
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. An awareness campaign could shed light on Suggestion
safer
this
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For example
, a similar intiatve
in Netherland resulted in a 61% increase in people feel readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiative
more safer
than before.
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in some nation from crimes because of Suggestion
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fearness
and make in a mind that it could happen again. an emotion experienced in anticipation of some specific pain or danger (usually accompanied by a desire to flee or fight)
fears
fairness
This
problem
can be solved if government start addressing the security
power regarding crimes becomes strong
than before.
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