People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are effects of this?
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lead
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restaurants which offers ready made foods and they also
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through online food
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For instance
, there are many working women who opt to have these easily available foods than home made foods.
The major effect of these fast food
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health
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health
like obesity and many other health
concerns like diabetes which has become common in this
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