The graph shows the hours spent in different study methods during a two year course
The graph shows the
amount
of weekly Change the quantifier
number
hours
spent studying in the library, with a tutor or lecturer or using the internet during a 2 year
course.
Add a hyphen
2-year
Overall
, the use of the internet increased, while
time in class and lectures declined and time in the library varied.
The most striking trend is that there is a dramatic increase in the use of the internet throughout the period, especially between the first and second
semesters of each period, with hours
increasing from about 3 at the beginning of the course to over 10 by the end.
Hours
spent in a classroom or lecture were initially
the highest at approximately 7 hours
a week, increasing to 8 hours
in the second
semester of the first term. However
, the figure fell during the second
year to finish at only 5 hours
a week.
Time in the library was the most fluctuating, initially
falling from 4 hours
down to about 3 hours
, then
rapidly increasing to 8 hours
before once again declining to end at about 6 hours
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