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Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree on disagree ?

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The use of
imprisonment
 is a common form of punishment followed by the law. But a majority of people hold the opinion that education and training skills can be a major factor in crime reduction. I partially agree that
prison sentence
Suggestion
a prison sentence
the prison sentence
 is not the only solution to criminal activities as educating the prisoners can help them too. Some people think that
imprisonment
 of the criminals is mandatory for reformation of the person and the society as a whole. As recidivists
is
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are
 a common
reason because
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reason, because
 of which people are put behind the bars, there is a fear among the culprits that unlawful conduct has serious consequences.
However
, without the possibility of punishment many individuals would break the law. Without serious punishments like
imprisonment
, people would seek vengeance against each other which would result
into
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in
 endless conflicts. Education helps an individual differentiate between the right and wrong. The idea that prison should offer education to inmates is gaining popularity. In a recent survey conducted, it has been proven that
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of the criminals belonged to a lower social group and were illiterate. If the government start educating or giving
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
 training to them, it may improve their employment prospects which would result
into
Suggestion
in
 crime reduction. To sum up, the traditional punishment of
imprisonment
 should not be considered the only way to deal with criminals. It is important to provide education and other skills so that they can become transformed individuals.
Therefore
,
instead
 of sitting idle in jail and thinking about vengeance, they will be preoccupied with more productive activities.

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