Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether children should make their own decisions about their food, clothes or entertainment or adults

such

as parents or

caregivers

make

such

decisions for them is debatable.

This

essay will discuss both sides of the arguments and provide

evidences

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evidence

why we should allow children to make their own decisions about their matters. It’s true, mainly at early stages of a life, that an individual

do not think

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does not think

about others’ wishes while making a decision. It’s mainly because he or she doesn’t earn

money

at that age and he or she doesn’t have a family to feed or take care of. I remember that when I was a

teenager I

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teenager, I

always thought about buying the items I like or playing the video games

from

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for

the pocket

money

I received from my father.

Therefore

, some people think that allowing children to make their own choices will

result

in a

society

of individuals who only think about themselves.

However

, other people think that children should be allowed to make their own decisions about their matters because it will provide them a very good experience and learning

of

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about

the actual world they are going to enter. In my case, I learned the value of

money

and how to save

money

to buy expensive items by making my own decisions. If my father had made

such

decisions for me, I would have not learned the

money

lessons so earlier in my life.

Therefore

, allowing

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

to make their own decisions would actually

result

in a more matured and better

society

than the selfish

society

. While it’s true that

individuls

a human being

individuals

individual

generally do not think about others’ wishes before doing anything, giving children freedom to make their own choices would actually

result

in a non selfish

society

.

This

essay discussed why some people think that we should not allow children to make their

decisions but

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decisions, but

why giving them freedom to make their own decisions would

infact

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in fact

result

in a better for a

society

.