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what are the differences between two map in 2007 and 2010

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Two
 maps illustrate the way to get to a
city
 hospital of
two
 different
year
Suggestion
years
 (2007-2010). According to both maps, the main features which
is
Suggestion
are
city
 hospital is
sourrounded
confined on all sides
surrounded
 by Ring Road. In these
two
 maps, there have been
two
 features that still remained.
This
Suggestion
These
two
 features are
City
 Hospital and staff
car
park
.
Accept space
.
 Apart from these
two
 features there are some features that appear on the map of 2010 are
piblic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
car
park
 which located on the
east-side
of the eastern part of a city e.g. Manhattan
eastside
 of the
city
 hospital. The
further
 additional features are
two
 around-turn on the hospital Rd.
which
Suggestion
Which
 can lead to the bus station. Overall, there are
two
 major features that never change on both 2007 and 2010
map
Suggestion
maps
. These features are
city
 hospital and staff
car
park
.
However
,
Accept space
,
 there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2010 but not on 2007. These features are public
car
park
,
Accept space
,
 bus station and
two
 around-turns
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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