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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices
Many people believe that they have countless choices at present. I strongly agree with
this
 statement because we have various options available for watching a specific TV
channel
, adopting a
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
 lifestyle, playing the sports and for selecting an undergraduate course for our future.
Majority
Suggestion
The majority
 of people spent their leisure time in watching something which may include watching a movie, TV series, a documentary or a local
channel
. Most of them are confused which one to view because, they have plenty of
options
Accept comma addition
options, for
for example
, If someone wants to watch the news or cricket or about scientific developments, there are
number
Suggestion
a number
 of channels which allow you to watch these
such
 as BBC, CNN in which news is spoken in English language another
channel
 like Dawn news which is Pakistani
channel
 provides you news in Urdu language.
Living lifestyle
Suggestion
Living, lifestyle
 plays an important role in the status of an individual in a society. Specific people want to follow the style of their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 celebrities for that they have
plethora
Suggestion
a plethora
 of choices. Sports
has become
Suggestion
have become
 very popular in form of football, cricket, hockey and car races and there are many choices available in order to
play
Accept comma addition
play, for
for example
, when I was a child I used to play football but now I like to play cricket more. Students are very keen about their future. After completing their intermediate
studies they
Accept comma addition
studies, they
 have many options in the form of a field they want to study. A number of different universities provide plenty of courses,
for example
, NED
University located
Accept comma addition
University, located
 in Karachi, Pakistan of the best universities in the world. They have many undergraduate courses
such
 as
Bachelors
Suggestion
a Bachelors
 in Mechanical, Chemical, Electrical, Civil, electronics, industrial and many more engineering and technical courses. All in all, I conclude that the majority of people
thinks
Suggestion
think
 that they have many choices. And I admit it strongly and it should be seen as beneficial.
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  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
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