The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world
The given table chart illustrates the forested
area
in millions of hectres
in six different parts of the world in the Correct your spelling
hectares
year
1990, 200 and 2005.
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years
Overall
, it is clear from the table the
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that
the
majority of Remove the redundancy
apply
land
which was covered with forest
belongs to Europe while
the minority goes towards Oceania.
Looking at the table in more detail for Africa and South America, it is evident that the foreseted
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forested
area
saw a noticeable decrease over the given years. In 1990, around 749 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
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million
of
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apply
hectors
of Correct your spelling
hectares
land
was covered by forest
for africa
, Change the capitalization
Africa
this
figure slided
to 709 in 2000 and it Correct your spelling
slide
was
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apply
further
decreased to 691(000,000 ha) in the year
2005. South America followed the
similar trend, for Correct article usage
a
them
the figures went down from 946 (000,000 ha) in 1990 to 882 in the Add a comma
,them
year
2005.
Two parts of the world namely Asia and Europe saw a sharp increase in forested land
over the period shown. While
the forest
area
for former
climbed from 576(000,000 ha) in 1990 to 584 in the Correct article usage
the former
year
2005, Europes
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Europe's
land
of
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forest
had risen from 989(000,000 ha) in 1990 to 1001 in the Add an article
the forest
year
2005.
For Oceania , the forest
coverd
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covered
cover
area
saw a minute decrease of 1(000,000 ha) each year
. Nort
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North
America
forested Change noun form
America's
area
declined from 708(000,000 ha) in 1990 to 705 in the year2000
, Correct your spelling
year 2000
this
figure stood the same for the year
2005.Submitted by rathoresagar1548 on
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