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You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider: -Say what the problem is -describe the accommodation you thought you were getting -ask the provider to solve the problem

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Dear
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 Walter, I am Charvi Patel pursuing a specialised
course
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 in Marketing Management. I am here for the short term
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 of 3 months sponsored by my company Kaizen consultancy. I am writing to bring
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the several difficulties I am facing here at the accommodation. Let me explain, because of the fellow flatmates I am feeling disinclined towards studies and which is creating negative impact. We are four flatmates in total and
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 three are here for the training
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 computer skills for which they are not at all serious about studies.
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, all the time they
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 disturbing activities
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 as partying at our place, playing video games, calling their friends and chit-chats for hours.
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 my studies as I always quest for tranquillity for better concentration.
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, while providing me
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 residence I was told
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that the other flatmates would
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 be of the same
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 stream and a personal room will be allotted which is not the thing. I would be glad if I am relocated to another room where I can have the room for myself, or I may use the money kept for accommodation for hotel payment. I look forward to
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 from you at the earliest. Yours Sincerely, Charvi

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