In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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is destroyed

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need to protect the landscape because of global warming.In the past decade the society they give important, and they protect their

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for the better future of their children. To commence with to build a home in the scenery is not

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worthy of being recommended or suggested; prudent or wise

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construct a hotel and park the scenery of the area is not good looking.

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rural area humankind and government it is essential to give importance for the better future of the young people.