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Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
The litter free country could be a big blessing for any country. But, people create more
rubbish
instead
 of cleaning. They
use
 a
lot
 of products who are just creating
rubbish
 other
then
 giving benefits and
this
 thing creates a
lot
 of trouble for any country like
pollution
 and health related issues which occurs due to
this
rubbish
. I personally agree with
this
 above mention statement and I will prove
this
 by giving examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine Survey to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
Firstly
,
rubbish
 produce due to most of the things which now a day easily available in any market and people chooses them as they cost less. But, in the result it produces a
lot
 of mess which harmful of any living species are either those are animals, sea creatures or humans.
For example
, according to the Oxford University research in 2010 proved that 70% of
pollution
 created due to
rubbish
 items which we
use
 mostly in our daily routine. So, in the above mentioned example, it is proved that people
use
 more
rubbish
 now a days.
Secondly
, due to
this
rubbish
 now we are facing a
lot
 of trouble regarding air
pollution
, water
pollution
. There is a
lot
 of disease which comes due to usage of
rubbish
 product another example of a Times Magazine survey of 2012 shows that 30% of environmental pollutions occurs due to usage of plastic products. So, the government should take steps against the companies who introduce
such
rubbish
 in the markets.
Also
, the government should start campaigns related to the awareness of what's good for
use
 and what is not so, that people could understand the importance of using right and wrong in daily usage product and stop using that
rubbish
 product which are easy to purchase but, harmful for the health and the environment.

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