Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying products (such as cellphones) or services (medical treatments) do you agree or disagree?
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long because it frequently breaks and gets destroyed. They end up in the trash can or in the closet.
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task achievement
Ensure there is a balanced argument in the essay. Your essay currently leans more towards one side. It would benefit from slightly more discussion on why price may not be the most important factor or consider more aspects such as brand reputation or user needs.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical coherence of your argument by using linking words such as 'Firstly,' 'Moreover,' 'On the contrary,' etc. This will help in guiding the reader through your argument.
coherence cohesion
You have a strong introduction and conclusion, which sets up your argument well and provides a clear summary of your ideas.
task achievement
You provide relevant and specific examples which strengthens your arguments effectively, particularly the examples concerning students and product longevity.