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Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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In the world of artificial intelligence, people love to watch a
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 with amazing graphics, music and animations.
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 of which, film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a
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. According to me, to achieve
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 high level of animations and graphics in a film, it is necessary to spend lots of money and
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 consists of a good story, amazing graphics, beautiful music and talented celebrities and all of them comes with a good cost. Nobody likes a
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 about planets and stars if the
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 does not have good graphics.
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, Interstellar, an amazing
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 about space and time travel. It shows different planets in our universe with
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 fine graphics that we feel we are there while watching the
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. Due to the amazing story, acting, graphics and music it won an academy award. Nowadays, the directors understand that if they are making a science fiction, action
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 they have to spend on video graphics too along with other factors. The experts in
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 field use a technology CGI to create animations on a green screen which looks and feels real to the audience. It in indeed very costly, but it plays a vital role in the success of a
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. In conclusion, the success of a
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 depends on many factors and big brands
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 as Marvels, DC universe do not hesitate to spend millions of dollars on the production of a single
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, as they want to provide the best experience to the audience and when these movies hit the box office they earn more than they spent.

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