In the modern world, people no longer need to use food or products from animals, such as medicine and clothing. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

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The argument over the use of animals to provide food, medicine, and clothing has been ongoing for years. Some people consider the killing of animals to produce food and other products to be unnecessary. In my view, I agree with

this

idea and will discuss several compelling reasons in

this

essay. These days, we are faced with many public health challenges regarding poor health conditions, including cancer and heart disease, caused by excessive consumption of meat on a regular and long-term basis. Experts are calling for a change in human diets so that people can enjoy better health. Fortunately, many alternative meat products are available on the market. In fact, vegetarian diets are being

favored

preferred above all others and treated with partiality

favoured

by a growing number of people and can provide the same amount of nutrients for consumers.

In particular

, mushrooms and tofu contain high levels of protein, a kind of nutrient presumably only found in meat, and can

therefore

be used as a substitute.

Furthermore

, medical experiments on animals and medicines manufactured from animals’ body parts received little endorsement in the past. Nowadays, herbs and many other types of plant-based medicines,

such

as ginseng, can cure many diseases, prolong human life expectancy, and aid medical practitioners in the treatment of many illnesses. More seriously, thousands of wild animals,

such

as tigers and minks, are killed each year, with their fur taken to produce coats and accessories for the fashion industry. There are now similar products made from plants and artificial materials that can

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

our needs. Animals do not have to suﬀer for our needs anymore. In conclusion, I think that our needs and desires do not justify the suﬀering of animals and animal products are no longer necessary. We can choose a diﬀerent source of nourishment, medicine and clothing without any toll on wild animals.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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ethical alternatives
global demand
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cultural sensitivity
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global infrastructure
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In the modern world, people no longer need to use food or products from animals, such as medicine and clothing. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Fully explain your ideas

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree. You should write at least 250 words.

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.