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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays
cell
phone
 is like one of our hands,
its
the thing named or in question
it
 became one of prestigious thing in lifestyle like having premium car, villa and they are many advantages and disadvantages are there let's see them in deeply.
Firstly
, It's for communication purpose where we can connect with everyone easily. In olden days we can connect with only through calling, but right now we are
connecting
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connected
 through internet throughout the world. We can pay directly though mobile
phone
 using internet its of the great feature, We can even use it for money transferring from one person to another person in
olden days
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the olden days
 we need to go for bank standing in a big line we can avoid those things now. Through social media will get all the information from our friends and news from all over
world
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the world
.
For example
, Facebook
,
Accept space
,
whatsup
 etc.
Moreover
, We can use it for studying purposes through video and audio even we can take notes through
phone
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the phone
 itself, It
aslo be
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also is
also be
 useful for office purposes accessing emails through
cell
phone
 and can see
stock market exchange
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the stock market exchange
.
many
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Many
 companies are gaining profit through
cell
phone
 only.
For example
, Uber cab, Swigy food delivery, Ola cab
etc
 with
help
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the help
 of
internet
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the internet
 and
cell
phone
 they are accessing map for
pickup
Suggestion
pick up
 and drop services.
Although
, There are few disadvantages using
cell
 phones, Students addicted playing games throughout a day and watching web series in their studying hours, Connecting with unwanted people through social media. In conclusion, We can overcome those disadvantages by proper advice and
cell
phone
 having more advantages for day to day activities.
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