The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.
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a
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result that was conducted on adult education. The first graph illustrates the proofs why young
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make a decision to educate. The
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diagram describes how humans believe the
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of youth schooling should be portioned.
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subject and
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qualifications are the
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mature teaching
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followed by helpful for
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job, to improve prospects of promotion and enjoy learning or studying, and the price of each program should tell
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, employer and taxpayer of scholar. The
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develop prospects of upgrading and enjoy studying put up 22%, 20%, and 20%. The individual
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40% portion of
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that people think knowing
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of each scholar should be told.
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and
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take part
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35% and 25% of
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Vocabulary: Replace the words survey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Adult education
  • Lifelong learning
  • Professional development
  • Survey results
  • Pie chart
  • Career advancement
  • Personal development
  • Subsidies
  • Cost-sharing
  • Funding models
  • Government grants
  • Private sector investment
  • Work-study balance
  • Financial aid
  • Continuing education
  • Taxpayer contribution
  • Upskilling
  • Reskilling
  • Professional qualifications
  • Vocational training
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