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However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

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Science and technologies
are dramatically grown
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have dramatically grown
 in recent years. Where as art is the major essential entertainment source for many people who lived in past decades. In
this
 essay we can see reasons and how to bring people’s attraction towards
arts
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the arts
. In late 20th century
technology
 was in early stage, many people were not aware of
technology
 and sciences. At those period art was at peak stage in the absence of
technology
. People
tends
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tend
 towards to learn
arts
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art
 in universities and even in private institutions. People were making money by selling
arts
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art
 in markets and in expos and survived.
For example
, Cleopatra and Monalesa arts are sold with huge profits in many auctions.
As a result
, peoples were
lived
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living
 with happiness in those years. Science and
Technology
 are in rapid growth around the globe. Computer, software, Internet, Smartphone these are the words hearing in present days and these are
main source
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the main source
a main source
main sources
 for
technology
 development. Many companies are stared adapting technologies and using for their business. For illustration, Google is a search engine and it helps present and future learners
to adapt
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adapt
 towards
technology
. In society google
also
 a major part
for
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of
in
technology
 development. People
also
 making online marketing and making money for their needs. Due to science and
technology
 peoples have no time to concentrate on other activities. To conclude,
However
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However, technology
technology
 is good for
society but
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society, but
 I should not overtake people’s mind. In leisure time people should spend their time towards
arts
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the arts
.
This
 could create stress free life and to live happy.

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