In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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ry in t
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countries
he world have publi
c-funn
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publicly
e
d
furnished with funds
funded
healt
hcare
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health care
system
for h
elp
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to
their people can access good doctors or medical. Cost of medical care and medicine may expensive ,esp
ec
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,
ially in serious illness, so
this
system
can support finance to treat their ailme
nt. But
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ailments
some people want to pay their
money
for faster and better treatment. I believe
this
system
was creat
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created
every peopl
e,
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person
thus
paying more
money
than normal should not excep
t.
regard something as probable or likely
expect
accept
Public-funded
healt
hcare
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health care
system
should be a fair
system
.
However
, generally
this
system
often lacks funding and not h
as enou
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didn't have
isn't having
gh
money
all the
time
. Yet, if someone argue that they willing to pay more
money
is not appropriate bacau
se it i
for the reason that; on account of
because
s a cutting in line.
For example
, who have a lot of
money
can go to see a doctor
first
,it
is
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,
me
an the
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means
poor people, almost have the number than rich people, might be left or waited for long
time
. When someone have
been a se
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has been
had been
is
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time
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laboured
labours
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all of them sick
who will help
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sick, who will
us.
This
is only one of two reasons why using
money
faster do not work in the long term. For
this
system
it should be equal for any class in society. If somebody want
to p
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wants
ay for better treatment they should go to a private hospital. They can treat you better and faster than public-funne
d
a reserve of money set aside for some purpose
fund
funded
system
. It can help
this
system
save a lot of
money
.
For instance
, if you have cance
r but you
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cancer, but
have enough cash you can go to the private clinic to take the best treatment
instead
wait in queue in public
healt
hcare for
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health care
g
et a no
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for getting
forget
rmal cure.
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car
can save a lot of
money
and
time
for
this
system
and
also
the poor people can see the doctors faster. In conclusion, publi
c-fund
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publicly
ed
healthcare
system
ought to be a equ
a
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an
l
system
for all citiz
en. Who
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citizens
want to receive better or faster should go to priva
te hospital or c
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a private hospital
linic.
This
system
often not have enough fundi
ng,
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funds
however
, if we have enough
money
should contribute your
money
because
this
can help enour
mous peop
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anonymous
le.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Healthcare system
  • Public-funded
  • Private healthcare
  • Two-tier system
  • Equity
  • Efficiency
  • Universal access
  • Resource allocation
  • Quality of care
  • Queue skipping
  • Economic impact
  • Ethical considerations
  • Accessibility
  • Public investment
  • Health outcomes
  • Social inequality
  • Health insurance
  • Privilege
  • Funding
  • Resource distribution
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